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Those details on those roses . . .

Oh! And don't fail me now ;)

wendybirdx responds:

Ahhh thank you so, so, so much! And yes, sir! :D

Damn, why the low scores? These are decent caricature designs!

Guess raters hate sketches

Blounty responds:

Thanks for the comment!

I guess you are right about sketches getting low scores haha oh well

It's clean and sleek; it is fine for now. What I'm more concerned is how this background's going to be implemented on the webpage.

Depending where the content will be, I have a feeling that your contrasting, green circles might be distracting. Maybe increase their opacity a bit?

Lastly, though it might not sound nit-picky, but those circles . . . If you are trying to make them look more like spheres, they're not. They're almost look like partially-cut spheres. You might want to fix that if spherical shapes are what you are intending.

Wondermeow responds:

HI Mate,

Thanks for your feedback, I'll let the guy decide what he wants to do with the image being added to his webpage, over here is more for show and tell. Contrasting on the other hand definitely will consider it, my half spheres I was being indecisive still think it turnout alright so I didn't bother going into detail, lol.

Kind regards,

Wondermeow

So far, I like the composition of this layout. What I would suggest (since I saw your animation rough), is have the pathway (where the mouse is following) to pop out a bit more.

Right now my eye's is leading towards the left side since the focal point is there.

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